Thursday, September 16, 2010

Bored

"I have many exits like the minamiguchi,
you see that girl sporting the fake gucci?
I say she's my ticket as you look behind me,
she's my light and you say "who's she?",

She's my light and she shines so bright,
She shines so bright and keeps my sight,
If I want out, she says I must fight,
I must earn my mark by taking flight"

4:04

29 comments:

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  2. I don't really know exactly what to make of that, but nicely written anyway (whoever wrote it) :)

    Cheers!

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  3. good job, your blog has a strong following

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  4. Thank you for the kind comments on my blog :)

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  5. Showing my nightly support, comrade.

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  6. It's just something I was thinking of...

    @adplus I did indeed... :)

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  7. Pretty good writing skills. Not sure what you're trying to get at entirely, though.

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  8. Did you write this yourself?

    Im supporting you! ;)

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  9. That is well written, a bit short for my taste though.

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  10. rhymin son

    http://wordofdodd.blogspot.com/

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  11. Lol nice, can't wait for more posts!

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  12. thanks for making this post, it was quiet inspiring.

    also, thanks for support access pro, lots more reviews coming up!

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  13. Thanks for the update. I'll be sure to check back often to see what new thoughts you have.

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  14. I like it, its really nice. You wrote it?

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  15. Thanks for the support guys.. I really do appreciate your comments. It's nice to hear some positive words in my life for once.

    And to those wondering, yea that was my work. I've always been interested in writing poems and verses.. Maybe having this blog will help me get some things on record..

    Anyway thanks everyone.
    ~Steve

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